Wednesday, April 24, 2013

The Death Arena of Hysteria



Hysteria is one of the famous outdoor arena in the world. It is a kind of challenging  arena to test your adrenaline like roller coaster and tornado. Hysteria’s formation has some seats which composite in a big square with connect to a big and tall circle pole inside.  Usually hysteria has fifty meters high. In each play there will be 20 to 40 people who sit in the seats. It is depend on how big the hysteria is.
To join the hysteria outdoor arena you have to queue in line first because it is the most popular outdoor arena, so people are exited about it. You may stand in line for about fifteen minutes. After that the guard please you to sit in the seats given.Then you can allowed to come inside and feel this adrenaline outdoor arena. 
Furthermore, the machine slowly goes up all the people in the seats. Then it stops in the air for several seconds. And suddenly it falls down you all with 300 kilometers /hour speed. You might feel that your heart is left on the top. You might also feel that you are going to die while the seats fall down in unexpectedly speed. Then while you are falling down with that high speed your bottom is not touching to the seat. So you feel fly while it goes down with high speed. You will go up and down by the machine for many times. Sometimes it goes slowly but suddenly it goes faster. 
After the game finish, you might feel sway, unstable and fly while your feet touching the land. Sometimes people get headache and vomit after they play in hysteria. Not many of them will come back to play it again. However the others will stand in line and play in hysteria game again and again.           

4 comments:

  1. hi glasses!! look, i'm your first commentator. uyaaaaaaaa \m/. ok stay focus to give comment(s) :D
    you write a title about the death but i think you just describe what hysteria likes. ok,i think that's enough

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  2. helloow mamamiaaaa!!
    lets rock your essay...
    what would i comment about?
    ehm...let me think .....
    so far so good i think. but the last paragraph quite confusing. is that conluding pargraph or what?

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  3. You make me wanna go there!
    Your essay is interesting, but I see some of your paragraph don't have concluding sentence, also I can't find the concluding paragraph.
    Wonderful Hysteria :)

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  4. I think you need to use the stronger thesis statement, your thesis statement seem does not clear, I don't know what are you going to explain about?

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